Hi Everyone!
I posted a poem on Yahoo at the following link last night:
Winter Winds: The Cycle Continues
I really don’t know what to think of it. I was using a very rigid form called a villanelle, which requires certain lines and rhymes to be repeated. I would appreciate it if you could read it and then let me know what you think. I can’t decide if I like this or not.
Thank you very much for your help!
Nancy
Tales from the Mom-Side 
I liked it… the only question I have is: Is the first word of the poem supposed to be “the” or “their” I really liked the feel and cadence of the piece. Good Job.. I am sure it was difficult to write though…
Hi Lee! It’s good to hear from you! I hope everything is going well. Thank you for looking at my poem; you are right that in the first line “The” should be “Their.” I am glad that you liked it; I was afraid it didn’t make sense.
I love it. I get a good feeling and vision with the poem and it reminds me that we have four seasons here in Alabama. I love the fall leaves and the winter winds always come! I like it. Good job.
Thanks Emily! I’ll take that from an English major! 🙂