Poem posted on Yahoo – Need your help

Hi Everyone!

I posted a poem on Yahoo at the following link last night:

Winter Winds:  The Cycle Continues

I really don’t know what to think of it.  I was using a very rigid form called a villanelle, which requires certain lines and rhymes to be repeated.  I would appreciate it if you could read it and then let me know what you think.  I can’t decide if I like this or not.

Thank you very much for your help!


4 responses to “Poem posted on Yahoo – Need your help

  1. I liked it… the only question I have is: Is the first word of the poem supposed to be “the” or “their” I really liked the feel and cadence of the piece. Good Job.. I am sure it was difficult to write though…

    • Hi Lee! It’s good to hear from you! I hope everything is going well. Thank you for looking at my poem; you are right that in the first line “The” should be “Their.” I am glad that you liked it; I was afraid it didn’t make sense.

  2. I love it. I get a good feeling and vision with the poem and it reminds me that we have four seasons here in Alabama. I love the fall leaves and the winter winds always come! I like it. Good job.

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